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Senryu (Halloween)

Halloween, fright night
sugar time, plenty for all
dentist, tomorrow

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Nooo, I'm not a stick in the mud, just having alternative fun on the subject. I hope nobody has to visit the dentist after, just very British humour. Happy Halloween to all who celebrate. This year, i imagine some what different for all of us.
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Hi Teddy,
Very clever and funny - also pretty scary, especially the visit to the dentist!
Thank you!
L

Yes, for me the scary part is the dentist! (Giggle)
I bet they love this time of year. Have a Lovely day my dear friend.

Thank you...Teddy

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You, too!
L

How odd that you should have posted a Senryu about a dentist, Wait till you read my poem about the dentist! As though your senryu isn't scary enough! Booh!! Jerry

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I suspect dentist especially the private sector, rub their hands together at this time of year, knowing they will have plenty of customers! Don't forget to brush your teeth! (Giggle)

Thank you...Teddy

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I'll brush my fangs, See? no cavities? You are right about this dentists. I can't wait to sink my teeth into the neck of my dentist. She looks like--Gina Lolobrigia--only more voluptuous. Ha ha! like my Mrs. Vampira would let me get away with that, lol. Bye, dear Giggles.
Count, J.

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LOL

Thank you...Teddy

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