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Senryu
opening the door
leads me to treasures unseen
hopes and dreams alive.
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Syllables 5 7 5 emotion
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Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Teddy15
Thu, 2020-10-15 12:56
Signor JK
That was exactly the message I was hoping to give, how kind of you to look so deeply.
Thank you...Teddy
Gracy
Thu, 2020-10-15 16:32
Dear Teddy. same here, one
Dear Teddy. same here, one never knows what's behind closed doors, but hopes and dreams remain. Unless you're a little phobic, as I am...LOL.
Enjoyed, Gracy
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Teddy15
Thu, 2020-10-15 21:27
Dear gracy
Good point my dear friend. I am not fond of lifts so when they open I'm always relieved. (Hug)
Thank you...Teddy
Barbara Writes
Fri, 2020-10-16 22:44
hey Teddy15
love this. senyru and haiku is my speciality on here.. you inspired me write one for tonight.. will see 60 a 12:00am so ill write a senyru on that. and a haiku behind it on that also..
*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.
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Teddy15
Sat, 2020-10-17 02:53
Dear Barbara
So good to see you, I adore senryu I'm so glad you enjoyed this, will look out for yours. X
Thank you...Teddy