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Senryu

opening the door
leads me to treasures unseen
hopes and dreams alive.

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Syllables 5 7 5 emotion
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Not Explicit Content

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one never knows what to expect behind a closed door. Your senryu works for me. Jerry

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That was exactly the message I was hoping to give, how kind of you to look so deeply.

Thank you...Teddy

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Dear Teddy. same here, one never knows what's behind closed doors, but hopes and dreams remain. Unless you're a little phobic, as I am...LOL.
Enjoyed, Gracy

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"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

Good point my dear friend. I am not fond of lifts so when they open I'm always relieved. (Hug)

Thank you...Teddy

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love this. senyru and haiku is my speciality on here.. you inspired me write one for tonight.. will see 60 a 12:00am so ill write a senyru on that. and a haiku behind it on that also..

*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.

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So good to see you, I adore senryu I'm so glad you enjoyed this, will look out for yours. X

Thank you...Teddy

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