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Senryu

And as I awake
to this, the glorious morn
in my birthday suit...

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content

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What a glorious sight this morning. Yeah, that senryu works well for us boys. I'm awake now, LOL. Thank you.
Jerry

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I thought I might wake someone up, today's my birthday LOL. I'm just indulging. (Giggles)

Thank you...Teddy

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Therefore the birthday suit! Oh, you little tease you! But many more to come, dear. Wishing you all the best, Jerry

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Ha ha I always have a party with myself!

Jerryk that's not the first time I've got you!

Thank you...Teddy

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but how much fun can you have by yourself? (oh, probably more than with some old fossil like me, lol. I'll be right over!) Don't eat up alll the frosting on the cake. lol. Save some for me. Jerry

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I can't promise not to be at least a little bit tipsy later! LOL thanks for being here.

Thank you...Teddy

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that one's birthday suit is the finest part of a person's wardrobe! Mine is a little worn, but still very servicable. Why just yesterday, I tried it on, and although it is a little tight here and a bit loose there, it still fit! congratulations on your birthday and
I hope that you have as many more as you desire. A good Senryu, BTW. ~ Geez.
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Thank you sir, also for your very funny review, I'm loose and tight in places too.

Thank you...Teddy

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Whatever suit you are in now, Teddy, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

LoL I do believe I've woken a few Americans up this morning! (Giggle)
Lovely to.see you here Sir.

Thank you...Teddy

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I'd meant to compose a wonderful birthday sonnet just for you, but Lynda's new pussy (cat) kept on chewing on me and this is the result:

THE WEIRDEST Birthday CARD

Oh, I have searched the world for sparks of truth,
But you can see that I’m out of god-damn luck;
Excuse my tone that is a bit uncouth,
But I could have said, oh crap or even f . . . .
(Change of tone, lol)
For I forgot the birthday of a girl
Who wears her special birthday suit—
No zipper, buttons, and her hair in curl’--
Our Teddy girl looks finger lickin’ cute!
I ponder here in my so grand domain…
If I a carriage should send for you—
(My wife would keep me on a chain),
Therefore, Teddy. expect my driver Hugh.
**** Meanwhile, please accept my humble rhymes,
**** And I sure hope they’ll ring your Birthday chimes.

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Dear jk that's wonderful LOL thank you.

Thank you...Teddy

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