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Senryu # 1

Submitted by raj on Sat, 2018-07-14 15:12

flint stone sparks a fire
alabaster form sculptures
I check my wish list -

Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
How does this theme appeal to you?
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Rula

Mon, 2018-07-16 13:25

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Awesome.
I espicially like the last line, though each line is a gem of its own.

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raj

Mon, 2018-07-16 13:34

thanks Rula for the read and inspiring comment. You got it spot on..the third line holds a lot of abstract..

good to see you back after a recess of few days..now waiting for you to post your piece..have you read the Blog of IRiz?
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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