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Self [Runic Symbol: Sowulo]
self is a shadow that follows the spirit
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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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How does this theme appeal to you?
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tyro
Sun, 2018-08-05 09:16
very agreeable raj
very agreeable raj
I also have such sentiments; but here in the West it would read, self is a shadow that should follow the spirit. Here, the physical is king.
I believe this is what the 'wast land' was about.
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
raj
Sun, 2018-08-05 13:15
Thanks Tyro
for the read and affirmative comment....
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raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentlovedly
Sun, 2018-08-05 11:24
nice one here
raj sublime ..in one liners u alone excel
raj
Sun, 2018-08-05 13:16
thanks for the read Lovedly..
thanks for the read Lovedly...i like to try out different forms...one liners is one of them..
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raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentRula
Sun, 2018-08-05 15:36
Hello raj
A cute line/thought.
I may try it one day.
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raj
Sun, 2018-08-05 15:45
I will look forward to your
I will look forward to your having a go at it Rula...you may find many muses in the runic symbols...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentSparrow
Sun, 2018-08-05 17:54
"self is a shadow that
"self is a shadow that follows the spirit"
There in the vastness of the universe our Spirits will meet.
There we will dance in eternal energy.
Joining yet separate entities, just call my name and I will be there.
Yours as always Ian, and the children ..
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Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
raj
Mon, 2018-08-06 06:03
Hi Ian
appreciate your taking time to read...these days I am challenging myself to try my hand at this one line form to the best possible extent...i liked the way you said "Joining yet separate entities"
regards...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentSparrow
Mon, 2018-08-06 10:35
raj
It is the way of the Spirit world you remain as a singularity, but in their world you can join another or many others, it is a world of love and energy all the individuals are seeking perfection.
It is a long story young man, here is the only place we can experience physical problems and to be in perfection you have to be aware of all emotions.
I wonder what your beliefs are on that side of being..
Take care young man and know it is great to walk with you.
Yours, Ian ..
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Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
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Rula
Mon, 2018-08-06 07:21
Self?
Don't sell yourSELF to the Satan lest you're lost
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raj
Mon, 2018-08-06 14:26
that's a good one Rula...i
that's a good one Rula...i will see if it can be worked on further...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
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