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The Secret's In The Wood

A Carpenter who doesn't love his wood
Could never make a chair as beautifully
As a Carpenter who does.

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I love this metaphor for the significance of passion! Very remarkable!

-{Madeline With Love ♥}

Thank you for your gorgeous comment.

Thank you...Teddy

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Thank you, I was thinking of Changing my career, and this is what came to mind.
I know you will think she really does have a strange mind!

Thank you...Teddy

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I agree with Geezer - perfect!
Thank you!
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Thank you. X

Thank you...Teddy

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I see what inspired these lines. However, repeating the word carpenter twice is not preferable I thought (imo)
So you can simply say

......make a chair as beautifully
As one who does.
What do you think?

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I see what you are saying but I like it better as is, it has more power on this occasion as the star of the show is the carpenter. I always love hearing your thoughts and I so look forward to your visits. X

Thank you...Teddy

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who does not like his wood
metaphorically

Nice to see you and your fun review.

Thank you...Teddy

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Very true.

Bathe yourself with poetry and let the world go to pieces.

Thank you Sir, I lost my job the other day thanks to Covid, so I was just contemplating a change of career and my mind just came up.with this, I guess
I may just have been day dreaming about my dream kitchen again! Thank you always.

Thank you...Teddy

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Oh, I'm sorry for losing your job. I pray and hope you get another one sooner than later.

Bathe yourself with poetry and let the world go to pieces.

Even better than the last, thank you for your wishes, it was on the cards because of complications of covid, I'm one of millions X

Thank you...Teddy

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