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The Second Coming

They line their lawn chairs
next to one another,
polarized shades cover their eyes,
a drink in one hand,
a pennant in the other.

Facing East,
a sunbeam blinds them
as they anticipate
the Risen Savior.


Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content


Anticipation is everything, right?
Happy Easter to you and yours, too!
Thank you!

author comment

savior! Put him on the mound and let him pitch his best sermon! ~ Geez.

It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

There ya go!
Thank you!

author comment

as they (anticipate)
did you mean
do correct me 'tis poetry

Nope, I do believe this group was expecting or anticipating, much more than imagining.
Thank you for reading!

author comment

It seems I commented w/o understanding
you meant a particular group god bless em
and you too
thank q

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