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seasons
seasons
coming and going
time over time
be it cooled or warm
i like all seasons
ain't it fun
how they come and go
bringing new life every time they come around
making new changes
time over time
i like all seasons
be it windy or sunny
sometimes i long for other one's to come
time over time
i know they will come around again...
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chrix
Thu, 2012-10-11 03:57
its all about seasons
its all about seasons
author commentCandlewitch
Thu, 2012-10-11 10:48
hello,
interesting persona. take on the seasons. welcome to neopoet!
always, Cat
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Ian.T
Sat, 2012-10-13 11:56
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Ian.T
Sat, 2012-10-13 11:57
Chrix
Welcome to Neopoet and we look forward to seeing more of your work and you joining in some of the workshops..
Have a look at Barbara's Renga and join in the fun..
I liked this just a play on the seasons, and a few words, but good all the same, Yours Ian.T
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wesley snow
Sat, 2012-10-13 21:41
I also welcome you to NeoPoet.
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