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Season Of The Bitch

Season Of The Bitch

Lethal accusations fly from twisted, feral lips
as once again the feces hits the fan
demons skulk in shadow as she places hands on hips
fearing what they cannot understand

eyes flash super-nova as the verbal maelstrom grows
searing soul and sanity with flame
estrogen erupts with words more virulent than blows
causing gods to cringe in mortal shame

knife-like talons flail the air to sever time from space
worlds implode and species disappear
juggernauts are turned to stone by glancing at her face
and crumble when her naked hate shines clear

song grows silent, joy is dead, and tears pour down like rain
dream turns into nightmare with a flash
every feeling once ecstatic, now is fraught with pain
reeling from the onslaught of her lash

this is woman at her worst, no other force can match
and only one thing sates her evil itch
making all things masculine desirous of her scratch
thus begins the season of the bitch

C. Lon R. Bruso

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
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No recriminations please, it isn't about anyone in particular! LOL!!
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love the imagery that this piece offers.


Glad you enjoyed my rant! LOL!!

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You have captured a womans anger in words, and obviously felt her wrath. Or you could not have done such a perfect job when writing about it. Great work as always. Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

One does what one can and then hides in one's bunker! LOL!! Thanks for the great review!

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Loved the read. Enjoyed it


Hope everything is going well with you!

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Medusa will be very pleased with your warning,
she needs to be resurrected
and this write may just do that.
Complex but good read,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Medusa was my great grandmother! I never got to meet her but they say she could definitely put you between a rock and a hard place! LOL!! Glad you enjoyed this one!

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Just brilliant - vivid, descriptive imagery - no crit's it's beyond that. :)

Love Mand xxx

P.s fortunatley I don't get menopausal anymore - but when I did this poem fit the bill. He he

Always good to hear from you and I'm pleased when you enjoy something I have written!

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Never read one yet that I haven't enjoyed!

A stark account of woman blazing no holds barred wonderfully captured in script. Pretty captivating.


raj (sublime_ocean)

Much appreciated, and have a great day!

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