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Sealed With A Kiss

Love teases
flirting pleases
games excite
passion ignites
unspoken desire
mind on fire
beautiful fantasy
make reality
absolute bliss
sealed with a kiss

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Structured: Western
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A passion sandwich, title to last line a fun write, must be an old man's dream, and a young ones reality lol, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

ah thanks Ian for reading and commenting glad u enjoyed I write these things better than what they are lol didn't get a chance to read yours last night will get to it today much appreciated all the best sueb x

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I liked this little poem but I have to say I would have chosen another title a lot of people title their poetry with lines from the poem but I like to provide a clue to the write in the title, mine of late havent been all that great I am working on titles at the moment

nice work

love JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

Hi Jc I have tried to do that lately with some of poems never thought of it before till someone here mentioned it was a pet hate maybe it was yourself don't know why I didn't do it with this one glad u enjoyed this little one hope your well all the best sueb x

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It wasnt me (the pet hate) but it sometimes ruins the ending when the title is the last line, When I was first here all I wrote was rhyming poetry I have come a long way since then and I know you will grow as a poet I think you show potential

JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

ah thanks a mil i just enjoy cheers have a gr8 day x

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It's midnight here I just can't sleep :) you have a great day !!

Xxx Jc

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

oh its 1.07 in the day here my lunchtime at work get some sleep x

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Brain fagged,overworry
Can't write,very sorry
Tried hard, bad pen
Best wishes, Amen

One of my first exposures to poetry and I am not sure who wrote it. Any clues?

no i've never heard it thanks x

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