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I write verse that makes poets think
Prompting reviews nice and adverse
Some might feel that the poems sink
World is better with views diverse
Aim not for popularity
Just striving to be recognized
Not only for integrity
But be truly characterized
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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weirdelf
Mon, 2019-01-21 07:04
Good to name yourself
a typo I think, first verse, third line 'stink' rather than 'sink"?
[grins]
dig your concrete integrity.
cheers,
Jess
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OriginalRhyku
Mon, 2019-01-21 11:24
Weirdelf
Cannot argue with your logic. Nice makeover from your original emoji.
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