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An insight to the way you look at some things, I am a bit wary as to commenting on your words as I have done over the past few weeks (Had an Esker week) then to find there was no answer to what I had taken the trouble to say, but I shall persevere for a little longer.

limbed:- legs that support either us or buildings
works :- shows a picture of work being carried out
latticed:- a pattern of metal serving a purpose
load:- another support that can help
words:- as scaffold that can support many things

(Scaffolding is a temporary structure used to support people and material in the construction or repair of buildings and other large structures.)
Not sure what else to say on this one It said everything or suggested all that was needed,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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