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SATURDAY WHOSE BIRTHDAY

It's one more
Saturday
I add on to my years
today
like all wear ear rings
but

why I can't

never mind happy dancing
romancing
big big brass band
zing zanging
moderna era
ringing
all normally singing
we are smaller beings

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a birthday celebration? Why can't you wear earrings? I have a friend who dresses like 'Clinger' and wears earrings he is very stylish! ~ Geez.
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is your friend a guy or girlish shy did you wear earrings too lol

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Corporal Klinger from Mash? The cross-dresser? Like that. He's a great guy that likes to wear dresses and earrings!
~ Geez.
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u know Gee thanks

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being a bad-ass-biker, I did wear an earring! I had a few. My favorite was a skull and crossbones, like a pirate.
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Gee it's OK
have fun

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