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sans only.. sans!

'sans all will you...'''

this is the most creative desire
of all human
man and woman

I have composed so many
as Shakes...too did...

'''sans all will you...'''

fill in the gaps as teeth fall

mouth smells and ink dries et al
kiss now my balding head
when dead just fly a flying kiss

but with tearful eyes
when there will be for momentary
no smiles
but sparkle in your eyes
see how time flies?

ere we all pass by
you, me, he and she
no one for ever will be....

so smile a while
why bother in the cold
as you lay
guys pass their way
also sooner than later
too pass away!!!

will you till then besides me still stay?
I wonder as I see
a shy wink
as shout you in my ears
damn you 'tis poetry only
why sans all?

why weep 'tis too early
and now come along
sing with me a lullaby
to put you to sleep
sans me!!!

but never shout at me
will promise thee!

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I rate this one up there with your best, just beware of the word sans, not sure if you have picked the right one but everything else is Bardic,
Go well into the quiet of age there you will find many things humility and a strange love of all things,
Take care young Bard, Yours Ian..

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Unconditional love to you all.
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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

in frenchy tis
tis fit

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