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Sampling Cards Poemys

1.Time Travel
They, meaning
wee humans, collectively
finally reached the comet
a decade of flying in space
what precision mind can trace
okay lace

do let me know
which god
helped them
in this race

If silence is gold
then god
has become old

move along with times
if one still may

2.Black Beauty
as you lie in black darkness
it overcomes the darker clouds
as you awaken
souls of human
darkness is the blackest beauty
black horses
run about
Your mirror is a reflection of an inner, concealed darkness.

The sun is within
the grip of twin trees
where will it go
heaven knows
the sun will slip away
so it seems
from the trees

4.A beautiful summer
gone is the spring
of yester years
now we are in the midst
of a lovely summer

From where to where
the sun goes
is any ones guess
as autumn stands by
at times thresh

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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One night a thought came to me Why not standardize GREETING cards These are a few samples only. A photographer or painter can design the background of theses cards.... Your views please
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Not Explicit Content


what you mean standardize cards? What cards?

I would have stopped the first part of the poem at the line:
"Your mirror is a reflection of an inner, concealed darkness".
This would have been one of your best if you had stopped right there! ~ Geezer.

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stopped thanks
many greeting cards these

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wow GEE

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