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A sabbatical intended now CONTEST POEM OF THE WEEK

Would you like a break
a sabbatical

make no mistake
a few hours leave I take
for more poetry to make

as I visit the wash room
the loo
get rid of my nose of flu
no not Covid
(that wasn't home in 2015)

will it do
I ask of you...

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

I think you have an excellent idea!!!

*hugs, Cat

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a break is something we all should take
go down by the river
Too many days we don't make
time, not even a sliver

Grab a pole, dig some worms
put your line in the water
Sit by a pond or the sea
I think it's something to order

Come back around
refreshed once again
I sit here on common ground
while you rid yourself of pain

~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

Mamas Waiting Hopefully

BUT THE DOC
Says
HE Wonders
HOW I AM Holding
TO This Earth
Since Long
SO Long

HOW Much More
HE CAN'T Guess
BUT Does Profess
Some DAY
IF NOT Today
I Shall
AS I Must
GO Away

LET THE DAY Come
ONE DAY
Some DAY
ANY DAY
When

HE CAN'T Play Magic
HE'S A DOC Only

author comment

we all deserve a break sometimes just make sure your break isn't a bone

glad to see the star
from distant far
is it u STAN
AH AH

author comment

Sabbatical? It doesn’t connect to the rest and breaks the flow of rhyme and
Changes pattern of rhythm. Other then that I enjoyed it and I also relate you can always take a break but not without a good reason. Thank you for this poem

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

for replying for the first time Hope u r well I AM NOT MUCH OF A POET TRYING SINCE 6 DECADES WILL I ever be????

author comment

I am doing well still heal but we’ll all the same

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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