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S t r e n g t h, W i s d o m : Uruz , Ansuz [Runic Symbols]

Submitted by Rula on Wed, 2018-08-15 13:20

True strength is the mother of courage, the daughter of wisdom, and the sister of confidence.

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raj

Wed, 2018-08-15 13:43

a great line Rula....

wondering though why you did write only wisdom in bold letters but not so the other elements of strength namely courage and confidence
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Rula

Wed, 2018-08-15 15:34

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Great to know that you thought it's great ^_^
I put the two runic symbols ( wisdom and strength) both in bold. I don't know if this shows. But maybe I have to add Wisdom to the title?

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raj

Wed, 2018-08-15 15:59

After adding Wisdom in the subject field it now makes sense why only two words are in bold....hmmmmmmmm so you are doing two runic symbols in one go eh!
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Rula

Wed, 2018-08-15 16:11

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but I then that bothalmost belong to one category:-|
I think it's more challenging to have the two in one go.

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raj

Wed, 2018-08-15 16:13

certainly more challenging it is friend Rula to do two-in-one-line
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