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The Royal Rush [Limerick]
The Queen had a touch of Flu
the King fed her a spicy stew
she turned bloody red
jumped out of her bed
then rushed to the palatial loo
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Keith Logan
Thu, 2016-04-07 18:50
Rush Indeed
This is what a limerick should be, humouros to fit the jaunty beat. I have seen elsewhere that limericks can be serious. Seriously? Let topic dictate rhythm and nowhere can my mind connect a solemn subject matter with a happy beat.
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raj
Fri, 2016-04-08 05:11
Thanks Keith for your time,
Thanks Keith for your time, read and appreciative comment...
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentRula
Fri, 2016-04-08 02:50
Raj
great fun indeed. I am not sure if you can post two submission. Why don't you choose the one you're more happy with?
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raj
Fri, 2016-04-08 05:12
Hehehe Rula...I am posting
Hehehe Rula...I am posting these for fun only and try my hand at this form of poetry...good to know you found this funny...raj
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