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roving down the corridors of a hospy i looked around u ok v ok

roving down the corridors of a hospy i looked around u ok v ok

Are you okay

get well soonest
shall miss your lovely comments
get well soon
now rest

the world shall move on
till you return
I shall keep the windmill alive...
shall ensure that the sun does also rise
to the correct second
shall also direct it to go down under
to enable you to sleep sounder
the guys playing music loud
will be attached to a cloud
and then they will soar away
and clarinets for heavens angels only play

none will hear them so to say
sleep my friend we shall keep vigil
for you all day..

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Thank you see you in a week or so


Love Jc xxx

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

for the week
when you return
and post comments in turn
but don' feel weak
we seek


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Directing the sun to go down under



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