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Rosy Tribute

Roses are my fave...
they make one brave...
upon the button holes of kings
and
upon the graves of mankind...
roses we all find...
yet do we know...
Roses never fade,
in the book’s pages
in the shelves of time
they continue to lie
that's why
roses never ever die
When you open a page of time...
roses come to your mind ...
the fragrance remains
and
love doesn't stain...
roses,
as roses even though dry ...
come alive and forever remain......
roses never decay
that we all say,
and ...
live forever in heart's domain...

Add on by courtesy Mark.....
Roses are rarely mixed with other blossoms
and
Normally grown in their own houses
by
Specialists skilled

Those who receive them become thrilled
yes
of love and roses in print
forever an imprint

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Free verse
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Comments

Good tribute to the flower of love and passion. Have you considered cutting back on the number of times you write roses never die. In my opinion any overuse of a word or phrase tends to erode its impact..............stan

makes the rosy tribute
rosier Stan
.thanks for your invalueable input
as always

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I too love roses! They press well between the pages of a book!

always, Cat

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with your permission
can I add on this para
as your additional contribution .???

Furthermore it's the first time,
maiden I see of your coming
Through my poetic alley
thanks for it too

loved

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With gratitude

I love to share
with the world
what-s0 -ever I can
as we all are passers by
of our mainland
lets carry a
ROSE
in our hand...
thanks Mark
I'm quite frank...

loved

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I love to share.....

loved

author comment

a loving and living sign
for all those who enjoy life
and
sure enough you do
thus Loved once again
does thank you

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