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Romanticism

Submitted by lovedly on Mon, 2015-11-16 20:03

Quite a quiet
Romantic poet
loves and adores
beauty
for he
alone knows
what’s it

to be in love with a million
Hopefully!
someone will fall
in my cup

my eyes will see
a butter cup
a fly
a bee
and
a butterfly kissing flowers at me

lovely must she be
to fly about me

I shall throw away
my heart
with glee
if she comes
flying to me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Sparrow

Tue, 2015-11-17 19:37

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You are getting sweet,
lovely wishes there young Bard.
I wonder if that love has yet saturated your thoughts
Then confusion will be the word of the day.
Go well young free Spirit,
There is a flower waiting for you to settle.
Yours, Ian..

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

lovedly

Tue, 2015-11-17 20:22

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you are that kindly light
which illuminates
a lonely eagle
on it's flight

ere ..... say what now you may

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