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Romantic holiday

Just returned

It was real fun being on the road
viewing the valleys and hills glide by
we all were so happy
all galls and guys
all were really gay,
no, not the way you all are today
there were friends from all walks of life
gals and guys
some could have been bi’s
one can’t about anyone say today
we had a lovely holiday

went hand in hand
on a ferry
it was like there were
many Toms and Jerry

all were in smiles on top of the world
we had coffee at Tim Horton’s

then we drove back in the mid of night
left our friendly guy behind
to continue to more find
may be possibly grind
as we all returned home
we got to know
the Roman holiday was still on
lover’s show must go on…

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Sounds like you's had a lot of fun, and descibed in your own unique way. Loved it... Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

you are kind to
pass my way


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