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Rogue State
What constitutes certified rogue nation?
When criminal leaders commit murder
Without any fear of repercussion
Tar victims as threats to social order
The judicial system will not assist
As subservient serfs dismiss what’s fact
When the victims’ kin in their claims persist
Servile stooges react as per their pact
However despite all their state power
The time of reckoning is drawing near
As victims’ kin bask in their winning hour
And the criminals face justice and fear
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
chevyvent
Sun, 2018-07-22 12:47
Very beautifully written
Very beautifully written makes you think of a sunset beach. Toward a renewal you have encountered very good meaning in piece. Let the words trickle down your mind through your thoughts. You made a decent stab at it very creative piece you got this very good. Thinking of a rainbow moment with words its a stretch of the imagination. Just some thoughts about this piece, True words true to life really beautiful in its form.
Mario Vitale
raj
Sun, 2018-07-22 14:23
Sunsets and rainbows??? Mario
Sunsets and rainbows??? Mario you must be joking...there are no rainbows after sun sets..please make sure your comments are in sync with the write
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raj (sublime_ocean)
OriginalRhyku
Tue, 2018-07-24 01:18
Mario
Thank you for your kind words.
I believe that the truth will set you free -words to ponder for those who deal in untruths and their low level serfs.
author commentRoscoe Lane
Tue, 2018-07-24 03:40
Very good,
Very good and I only wish it were to come true. Regards Roscoe.....
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
OriginalRhyku
Tue, 2018-07-24 04:24
Thanks, Roscoe
Justice moves slowly but surely.
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