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robins

robin in clean mud.
flap your wings, hungry sounds - choir
above remains dry.

Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

of a robin getting the 'early worm' while the other birds remain dry and hungry! A life lesson.

~ Geez.
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