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Road To No Where

sleep
lost
in the dark conclaves of my mind
the premonition of a corridor
whispers
blind transparency
clusters of worry permeates
no hand to hold or heart will mend
no one who you can depend
you lapse in the vast expanse between space and time
the screams of primitive beings
creatures in a peril of doom
we go towards the light yet still can't find
solace
awake to what ?

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a real nightmare! It is hard to feel so alone and with nothing to dispel the pain of the dream. Nice work. ~ Gee.
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