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Reservoir

Submitted by Renee Willier on Sat, 2023-05-27 02:25

You’re my reservoir of all the things
I promised you
And couldn’t do
My little source of rotten hope
You overflow
With all we’ve had
To undergo
And all the shame
Of such an ineffective love
As mine
To run you dry

Style / type: 
Free verse
Last few words: 
I’m not really looking for feedback, just community.
Editing stage: 
Not actively editing
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Breakinglogic

Sat, 2023-05-27 07:51

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"my little source of rotten hope" is very catchy and rhythmic. I like the theme and, and the brevity.

☆ raffy

Geezer

Sat, 2023-05-27 10:33

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