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Resemblance

Connect with the rhythm of nature,
in its moods we discover
shades of life
in all their true colors
resembling mine and thine

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Free verse
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a nice short one.Thank you for sharing.

Alid

Thank you for the read. Good to know you liked it.

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raj (sublime_ocean)

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and
friend Ian will say
hey bard
how another one has been born

mine or thine
then divine thou and thy
and why not
why!

You may have read Ian's response to your comment lol. Thank you for the read and your comment.

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raj (sublime_ocean)

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he keeps me /us humoured else poetry may become boring

hey bard, how another one has been born, mine or thine
then divine thou and thy, and why not "I"
Hey loved is becoming psychic,
well I never would have thought it.
There was me thinking he was as straight laced as the rest,
Now he dabbles in those realms of spirits.
Your write Joined in with the expression of think in colours, well done, though maybe a little to simplistic,
I shall have to send a seeker to Loved he is hearing things that I have not said lol,
Yours as always Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Thank you for the visit and your comment. "Simplistic"?...honestly i had never looked at it that way. Now that you say it, it does appear to be simplistic to me. But so is the message too I tried to convey through this poem, isn't it?

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raj (sublime_ocean)

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I have probably been hearing the old time religionists shouting out, this is fine as the others say, though would like a little more conviction in the overall message,
Yours as always Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Noted your observation, though honestly I am unable to comprehend what exactly made you feel it lacks conviction.

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Yes like it a lot, succinct and very accurate. Regards Roscoe..

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

Many thanks for your time and visit and read. Very much appreciate your comment on this poem.

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raj (sublime_ocean)

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Succinct and enjoyable.

Cheers

Leonard Daranjo

"When the waiting stops, the living begins"

Thanks Leonard for your comment.

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raj (sublime_ocean)

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I especially loved the last five lines...I guess this means that I like it all.
Beautiful!

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raj (sublime_ocean)

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raj (sublime_ocean)

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