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REQUIEM

Submitted by Geremia on Mon, 2016-01-04 18:20

REQUIEM
We are frail and faulted creatures
each of us set to implode as designed
never to know, when, where or why,
subjected to a random act of violence
of Time in medias res...
but we are feeling creatures
of a tender heart and a knowing mind,
interlocking souls whose spirits intertwine
and when one of us dies, a part of us
must die too..

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Sparrow

Mon, 2016-01-04 18:36

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A very apt write as we drift into another day.
Take care and never fear what tomorrow brings,
Yours, Ian..

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Unconditional love to you all.
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Geremia

Mon, 2016-01-04 18:38

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we all need to find peace in ourselves and through each other.

joe

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Sparrow

Tue, 2016-01-05 19:16

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I am here always,
maybe one day just in Spirit, but we will know that in the light, we shall be able to talk in words or think.
If you are in need then we are here to give, if you don't need we are here to share.
Take care young traveller, the journey will become beautiful, but who dares to say when,
Yours, as always, Ian

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

Geremia

Tue, 2016-01-05 19:33

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I truly hope to meet you on the other side--if there is one.

joe

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lovedly

Tue, 2016-01-05 22:02

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WELCOME TO THE COLDEST REGION

Temperatures here minus 11 degrees Celsius
but feels like minus 20 degrees
with wind-chill
come along you will have coffee with me
cold still cappuccino
for 3 dollars only..(for you Joe will be two and free)
iced not in snow
but fridge

Loved welcomes the poet fraternity
at twenty minutes passed midnight
to feel the minus 30 chill
bring a blanket or woolen quilt...
If you are not strong built

Joe I will lend you don't worry

Geremia

Tue, 2016-01-05 22:23

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Wish I could. Am housebound./

thanks,:) joe

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Roscoe Lane

Fri, 2016-01-08 00:23

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So very true my friend, Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

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