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Rend/Ruinous

Submitted by washing tears on Mon, 2012-03-19 01:22

I’ve got two armfuls of love for you
I’ll bring ‘em over
To hang your broken mirrors back up
To hang your broken mirrors back up

I’ve got two armfuls of love for you
I’ll bring ‘em over
To kiss your lovely lips, again
To kiss your lovely lips, again

Darling, won’t you pull my strings?
Darling, won't you let me sing?
Your angel face has fallen,
I’ve fallen all for you, here
Your angel face has fallen,
I’ve fallen all for you, dear
Darling, your falling on me

I’ve got heart-ache meds for you.
I’ll bring ‘em over,
To fix your everyday cracks and creeks, of love
To fix your everyday cracks and creeks, of love

I’ve got heart-ache meds for you.
I’ll bring ‘em over,
To overdose on your love, for you
To overdose on your love, it’s true

Darling, won’t you pull my strings?
Darling, won’t you let me sing?
Your angel face has fallen
I’ve fallen all for you, here
Your angel face has fallen
I’ve fallen all for you, dear
Darling, you're falling for me.

I’ve got two armfuls of love for you
I’ve got heart-ache meds, for you
I’ll bring ‘em over…
To start over….

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage: 
Editing - draft

Comments

Ian.T

Thu, 2012-04-05 03:21

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This would be very good as a Lyric for someone to put music to, you should have a word with Hooded Stranger here he writes his own stuff.
Though not my scene it seems a good piece, and you have put a lot of work in there, Yours Ian.T

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