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Remembrance

Retracing the past
where dear memories bloomed
as moments shared
filled with colours of love,
friendship and innocence

The best years of my life
are in my youth
when my body is filled
with more vigor
and the heart is fresh
with hope and dreams
for the future

I wonder about old friends
who once stood by my side.
Its long since we have parted.
Each of us, finding our own paths
to embrace our ambitions.
I hoped our paths will meet
for it felt as if our reunion
has been long-overdued

Sighing, I faced the sky
sending my prayers
and well wishes to the wind
for the friends I have lost
through time
yet always there
in my mind

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Your starting to let the artist in the poet out, your starting to paint your world for us, I am loving watching your growth....well done

love and hugs Jayne xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

I owe it to people like you. Each time I feel like I want to stop writing all I have to do is read your works and revive that old dream and I started to write again. Anyway I'm glad you like this one. Thanks for the visit.

Alid

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good and sad

you have not remembered me

am i now out of sight

do say so
I am a simple poet
you and all know
off the cuff
i compose

and let you aalllll
in the garbage bin of time
dispose
some repose
I now suppose

hankering again eh!
if Jess sees it
read it and then I will delete it

Jess is coming
go see out of the window
leave the door ajar
we will know
when he is not far..
but do never forget me

loved

if you are a simple poet then what am I? nah, you're good. I'm still the amateur here. LOL.

Alid

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One that we have been waiting for.
Good words, careful thoughts, and a great theme.
Welcome to another level,
Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Let's hope that I can keep this up shall we?

Alid

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