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Remembering Lifes' Seasons

Submitted by docmaverick on Tue, 2011-01-18 19:19

The summer can bring back a memory

that our winters' antics made,

an ice-cream can cause a "brain-freeze"

even though we were searching for shade.

Life's seasons seem to cycle, that way

and each recollection can bring,

a bushel of bitter/sweet memories

that can cause our hearts to up, and sing!

It's funny how we can come across, sometimes

as not being easy to satisfy,

for, sometimes during a happy occasion

we might recall something that makes us cry.

I'm pleased that I'm even capable

of remembering various past events,

because, anytime is actually a good time

to maybe smile, at our previous laments!

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Structured: Western
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Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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docmaverick

Wed, 2011-01-19 15:19

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....you have given me a revue that has quite simply, "made my whole day"! And so, I must thank you. I've been stuck in this "zone", of late. I promise to shake it off, very soon...okay?
Thank-you, somehow I knew you'd understand.
I'm happy you enjoyed this one.
take care of you, & yours;
doc.

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docmaverick

Wed, 2011-01-19 15:25

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...good to hear from you! And, I certainly thank you for your generous revue, your words are greatly cherished, because I feel I'm aware of your integrety in your understanding of the craft....so, I really feel honored.
Enjoy all of your seasons, for all the right reasons!
Take care, friend...
doc.

Neopoet is "newtriffic" !
...from the heart, or a reasonable faxcimile;
david a. goodwin #{:>{)} @==

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