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Remain Silent

Thanks all
who are my well wishers

now I post fewer poems
it irks some
some are jealous
many indifferent

they need a vacancy
in the far distance
wait a million years
for a

foolish some
can't enjoy a lovely
sunny day
a swim in Atlantic ocean
as I did
yet say they are looking
for an unknown heaven

mad guys
teach them some one
life's real ways
won't soonly go away
may for much longer stay

could be 202x
my guess
if you maintain social distance
produce a different
kinda generation

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content


I like this very much, you have excelled in today's poem, the message is clear.
Sure we are the ones who can write these poems of covad so they will be here for generations to come.
We are part of its history.

Thank you...Teddy

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