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REFLECTIONS OF ANGER-updated

Submitted by Geremia on Sun, 2012-09-16 08:26

1 John 2:11
But whoever hates his brother is in the darkness and walks in the darkness, and does not know where he is going, because the darkness has blinded his eyes

REFLECTIONS OF ANGER
On wings of fire
I fall
into the darkness
like an angel of light
into the abyss pulled
by a darkened soul.
and part of me dies
to this world
and to the next
when I reflect.
the madness it brings.

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Ian.T

Mon, 2012-09-17 03:28

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In many religions and faiths the physical body is just a vessel, it carries the soul.
The mind is eternal, it is stored for you as each thought is thought, maybe just maybe, your Mother God bless her could tell you more, and there in that great place will be a library and written as if in stone all that you are and have been is written.
A beautiful lady will show you that the key to unlock the library is Love, and from all your writes, no matter how you have been afraid, is a love that many would be pleased to have , take care young Joe.
Yours Ian.T

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Geremia

Mon, 2012-09-17 03:35

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Thank you, Ian, I am trying to believe, but the "silence:" of voices past overwhelms me with doubt.

joe

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Ian.T

Mon, 2012-09-17 03:53

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Doubt is a curtain that hides many things, the silence will be filled with the thoughts of others and many colours you have not yet become aware of.
Take care fellow traveller and it is grand to be able to walk with you.
Yours Ian

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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