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Recycling

The cycle of life.
Every experience helps us grow.
Every growth helps us experience.
The circle of Life.

Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
A poem is worth a thousand pictures.
Editing stage: 

Comments

dare I say a bit trite?
But hey, no-one's perfect.

I look forward to your works and won't use the excuse "I wish I had more time", more truthful to say "I will endeavour to make more time" to respond to your works.

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Managing Directors, with Richard (themoonman)

Truth be told it's trite
Poetic review is right
True Weirdelf insight

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