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Recurrent Rhyku
Words that are sublime
An inspiring paradigm
Transcending our time
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Comments
Esker
Mon, 2016-10-10 10:18
U write these extremely well...
only change I thought of
because the are..
and our sound alright
But in my brain
putting in
"Transcending said time"
popped up for some reason
maybe the use of s and a
and I ...
otherwise I like this a lot
our is two verb
Hour
oww err
said in my head clumps
like a single syllable
sed...
but could be wrong.!!
thank U!
Mr Wolf!
OriginalRhyku
Mon, 2016-10-10 12:18
Esker
Thanks for your generous feedback.
There is a website that counts syllables when you input a phrase. I.typed in "Transcending our time" and the result was displayed as "5 syllables". I list the link for your review:
https://www.howmanysyllables.com/wordprocessor
author commentEsker
Tue, 2016-10-11 14:11
thank U
detailing I feel more then tech understand
i skip and absorb...not really taking a
hold like some on things..
ex. many can spell off lyrics too songs
know the singer..record company etc
type of music
Not me..I know like three words
Im not sure if Im lazy or missing
something
I attribute it too both
But I will follow your link
eventually when I get to
the home computer
thank U!