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Raining Thoughts

For hours and hours I sit
Beside the lamp dimly lit
Staring at a blank page
a poem prompt and my pen
In the spot I call my writers den

Nothing happens
Writers block
I reach for a bottle
And have a drop

Imagination oiled
Stagnation foiled
On I toiled
Thoughts start forming in my head
Where I feared was only lead
Dropping, raining from my imagination
Little by little
to majestic poetic creation.

Just like raining little acorns become big oaks
My raining thoughts became my poem

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..the erratic rhyme scheme and rhythm. I will be looking for more from you.

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

Thank you for reading and commenting ,I shall post more

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Looking forward to reading more of your work!

I sometimes write after drinking, however I have to edit heavily the next day (LOL).

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I'd never change anything I twrote when I'm drinking always my most interesting thoughts come with a drink or two !!

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I'd never change anything I twrote when I'm drinking always my most interesting thoughts come with a drink or two !!

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