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Radio station

I am a radio station
the voice of all communication
a world of expressing determination
specialty is just my cooperation

I only express words
given the shy a voice
a community now has power through me
the brave only use me for fame
teenagers see me as an opportunity
elder use me as an informer
I am a information center

voices are heard
feelings are expressed
thoughts are shared
fun is just a hobby

I have taken out fear
knocked out a future so near

Lephalale is my home
a home of many tribes
a home of joy and pleasure
a home of love and laughter
Marapong is only a place I am situated in

in the morning I am there
in the afternoon I am there
in the evening just decide to catch me
the night well I am just a provider of dreams

as a radio station
as an informer
as a peacemaker
as an opportunity giver

My name is Lephalale f.m

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or shall I call you Laphalate FM. :)
An awesome presentation of what a radio station is, or what it should be. Alas! we rarely have a trusted media these days.
Interesting writing indeed!
Thanks for sharing.

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