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r u living in the now

living in the now

you can live
only in the now,

yesterday has gone
as a wow

tomorrow may come
not ever as a tomorrow
but again another now

so remember
the now
live it as you may
some how

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Just wait a while I shall catch up or slow down, but either way, I walk with you.
Yours as always Ian..

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

now ur
slow man

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As I write this and ty[e one letter then the next I have slipped out of present into past.

Good write, my friend


your diligence and persistence
glad Richards helps u

good friends r hard to find
keep it FRESH in mind
Sir Joe

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if this poem's title is a question, I'll answer yes. Love the last stanza


whats ur QS ?

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if the title of this poem is added a question mark at the end, I'll answer "yes".


poetry and grammar
have no glamour
it's just your understanding

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Alid, my friend. I was taught not to use question marks in poetry. Prose grammar generally does not apply. :)


Thank you for the rescue
I keep telling all
ur a great poet
they may listen

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Good one Lovedly...short and succinct..


raj (sublime_ocean)

kind u passed by
happy valentiny

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