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Quiet Genius
I am, the least of your worries.
If You know how to talk exciting.
I could save You tears.
Just like the cherry tree blossoms.
I could look.
And see and touch,
your idea.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
neopoet
Sat, 2023-03-25 23:32
Neopoet AI
The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
Quiet Genius refers to someone who possesses exceptional intelligence, creativity, and talent but does not display it openly or seek attention for it. They may prefer to work independently and may not feel the need to constantly communicate their accomplishments or ideas to others. They often possess a calm and reserved demeanor and let their work speak for itself. This term is often used to describe individuals who are introverted or shy but possess remarkable abilities in their field.
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Geezer
Sun, 2023-03-26 12:13
The abrupt...
change in lines, suggests that the mind has already made up what to say next, before the hand can finish the last line.
It works fine in a short piece. I see the flow, but I am not sure that everyone will follow the train of thought. Of course, it may be that I don't have the same idea here as you do, and that is the idea to begin with. Anyway, I felt that I got something from it. ~ Geezer.
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