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A Question of Faith

If all tragedies of life
led to a path of warmth,
there would be nothing
left to write about...

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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What did you think of my title?
Last few words: 
I had an italian title which in english means we walk togther but i feel this one has more strength.
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Not Explicit Content

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one of those who reads Latin; I have no idea what your title ,means. I will wait for one of our enlightened readers to spell it our for me. I do like your thoughts and agree wholeheartedly. "If not for the darkness, there would be no yearning for the light". ~Geez.
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we walk together, is the title. Its italian... Hey geezer nice to see you here.

my poem means if we do not suffer tragedy , we do not always have the means to express it in our poetry. Thank you for your thoughts.

Thank you...Teddy

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Really like this one, Teddy!! It does what it says on the tin.

Brevity in everything
save, love, life, and wit.

Obi.

Thank you for your very kind words,
It's my pleasure when others enjoy my work.

Thank you...Teddy

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Double post

Thank you...Teddy

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Hi Teddy, so true in 4 lines. I can't be brief and meaninful, I envy you.
Enjoyed, Gracy

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"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

I would actually challenge you because I do not believe that you couldn't do it. I would love to see you try. Your kind words mean so much.

Thank you...Teddy

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