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Quest ...your eyes......

Quest to see
your eyes......

I have seen many eyes
they speak nothing
but the truth

mine speak of love and youth..
my eyes
I thought were beautiful,
till I saw in her eyes so blue...
so lovely and so sparkingly true

the babe was tromping about...
as if in ones youth
the pet had eyes blue
better than mine
how glad I am
all now knew.
our eyes are blue

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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A quietly good piece, have I read this one before ???
Take care young Bard, Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

pending for a week
hanging or drowning in the stream


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Excellent use of rhyme in a free form poem. The end kinda fades out though..............stan

they rise and fall like empires
but the end none can control

neither you nor I

the fading life
must endure
what is there to ensure????


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