the first line is a little muddled I think it is the word (was)

This woman who was stolen dreams, maybe (has) would for a replacement. or restructure the sentence?
the rest of the poem, I wouldn't touch. I like your title, it is strong and powerful, an in-your-face kind of title! the poem flows well for easy reading. and the ending comes around full tilt! I like that... my favorite lines are:

She found her life to be a loss.
I I tried to help her ease the pain.
But, on me, she would place all the blame.

*warm smiles, Cat
ever, eddy
p.s.
she sounds like somebody I would hunt, torture and snuff... may i have a crack at her? I will give you full credit for the title and theme.
ever, eddy styx

is one of tormented love.
Something that many have written about
and for the most part, you do a pretty good job of it.

I wouldn't make any drastic changes
but I would try to even up the meter a bit:

This woman who has stolen dreams
she's complicated everything
I held her heart in my eyes
until the day I realized

She was the Queen of lies
I found to my surprise

There were boundries she would not cross
she found her life to be a loss
I tried to help her ease the pain
but on me, she placed the blame

I tried to stop her running away
but for some reason, she wouldn't stay
Words she'd said so easily
somehow, would not surrender me

To the Queen of lies ~ Geezer.
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I liked what you wrote, but felt that you needed a little help with the meter.
My best advice is to read it aloud, read it to someone else, the cat, the dog, even yourself!
Then think about how to smooth over the rough spots, the stumbles.
You will find that you can rearrange the words, take one out, put one in, change the form of the word and
even change the word itself to one that means the same thing. Welcome to Neo.
I look forward to reading some more of your work. ~ Geezer.
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Discovering that the person you love actually lying to you is a heart broken really but just look inward and remember the little truth she has ever told you and forgive her that will give her a chance to change.

Anyway I like your rhymes. Keep writing the good works.

I think Cat and Geezer nailed the critique. I like your work. Three days running you have impressed me and so now I’m impressed with you work ethic as well. Just keep writing. Your bio says “it’s not something I’m particularly good at”; I’m pretty sure that’s just your own internal thoughts. I wouldn’t change that tho because the drive to improve comes from that feeling of wanting more. I ask you to remember this: while your internal voice tells you you need to be better, allow external voices (like myself and the others here) to offer compliments, let them in, accept them, allow them to inflate your ego a bit. Be proud of what you write even if you think it’s lousy. You’re creating entire worlds with words. World’s that some people will be longing to read about.

Got yourself a fan here.
Tim

There's no need of saying more things about the poem.
Cat and Geezer have spoken excellently! Therefore, I am of the the same opinion of their critique.

Beautifully written!