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Qartern from Barabara for Loved

I like this

This was eloquently written
Rhymes well in my poetic ear
Not knowing what a Quatern is
Neither I before Stan's contest.

A desire, a want and hope
This was eloquently written
Like lantern with darkness, elope
From within, your desire glow.

I'd love to come alongside you
To glow in this poetic art
This was eloquently written
No, it is not wrong to think so.

I'm not sublime, but I do know
The desire of this hollow heart
For exquisite poetic art
This was eloquently written.

Quatern just for you lovedly.
bt Barbara
raj _sublime

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Free verse
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imknow you can do it

*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.

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