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pure wine from divine

Submitted by lovedly on Wed, 2016-11-30 09:31

you are the only wine
red nor white
but the purest form
one of fresh wine
which inspires

ere,

even before it turns to wine
you make one shine

in all your glory
you have to tell this world
many a story
of why we become poets here
you say it loud
without any fear
none will dare
you spear

we are poets
but queer

Style / type: 
Free verse
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

chevyvent

Wed, 2016-11-30 21:07

chevyvent's picture

Encompassed a real quest for true English literature to be specific,
I would not change a thing it's a great writing with much respect.
The flow of wine made me think of the late Orsen Wells,
Savoring the best wine before his time.
Nothing out of line straight to the point with this piece.
Thank You,
Mario Vitale

Mario Vitale

lovedly

Wed, 2016-11-30 22:25

lovedly's picture

Shall be added to my list
BARD
WORDSWORTH
KEATS
FROST
Ian
the last is neopoets man
thanx
and of course JOE all know

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