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Prosaic Mosaic now Archaic

Prosaic Mosaic now Archaic

Emotion is just an inner feeling
thoughts are an issuance
while the words are the outcome
born out of such an amalgamation
so said poets before

If I say
of yore
many of Neo will say
O what a bore
the archaic-ness is for sure
ole silly poet only yours

Let us not forget
our roots and parentage
our initial seeds
as we cannot forget the
fundamentals
basics of our genes

so all Neo's you may
still freely sprinkle with

thee and ye and thou

some how
many will sooner
than later bow
ultimately to thee
all will be happy

somehow ego's clash
for a while after
a flash is cast
all at lightning speed
in the cosmos blast

egoists in their bareness
as Barons hastily hide

so with this off the cuff poet
enjoy a joyous ride
side beside
Why deride

A small **********s
You may side by side
your emotions subscribe
be bold not ever mild
Neopoet is not anyone's
lone
CHILD

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

really enjoyed this. an interesting look at how poets create foundations to society even as they're derided by society. or that's what i read into it. very sophisticated.

greg

author comment

the less one is read
so now get busy with the
EPISTLE CONTEST
at least the judge will have to read it

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