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proposal

I was visiting
a Central library once
a young gal was going around the library
in circles....
I volunteered to help her
in case she was struggling
for something special
and this is what she said to me.

'''Sir my mom told me
to go around
to a library to see,
how many guys come looking for me,
as they would think,
I'm as knowledgeable
as the librarian
and would propose to marry me ...''

Sir will you now help me?
What to marry thee!

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Her mom knows a thing or to about men, lol. A nice funny poem. Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

they shoulder such responsibility
from birth
to bring you to life ,
ere you predisease...
marriage and keeping teenagers safe
is one such...

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That you went to the library as a man did you stay in that guise or have you changed again????? Letting secrets out the more you write and your age has been showing but you have to go some to catch me La La.
Goodish write could have made more effort with the young lady LOL,
Yours, Sparrow

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

my mind is still 17
age you know
and
sex isn't questionable
as u call me bard
small though.

I continue to be an
ACTOR OF POETRY
thanks to Ian

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I stopped at 36 it was a lovely age, where I knew enough to be able to take on stress and love then many other things without the pain of being younger.
Later I was so glad of what I learned that year as it brought me through many things with a quiet peace that surrounds my Spirit..
Take care young Bard and shield your ways in a way that allows the best of you to shine through, Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

to see you writing
of something other than backbiting
Funny things of marriage and rings
Things that are so enlightning

~ Gee

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ever so far in my life
backbite
even though i very and mostly often
get bitten

I HAVE ONLY TWO PRINCIPLES IN LIFE
one when you are wrong
instantly say SORRY UNDERLINED
BUT
when you are right FIGHT
till the fight ends or you do
thanks anyway
sorry if I have misunderstood u.

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