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Promise Delivered [ Sunku WS]
Seeds
of hope
burst
Bees
deliver
promise
Offspring
births from a
surrogate womb
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
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Comments
valene
Tue, 2018-02-27 15:22
it's as sweet as honey
and harmonizes its flow perfectly.
Best wishes....val
raj
Tue, 2018-02-27 15:31
Many thanks Val
Many thanks Val
I appreciate your visit ...read and a very delightful comment
Regards and smiles...
raj (sublime_ocean)
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