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Prisms of Joy

There's going to be
a few dark days ahead
grey clouds
sun will be hiding
within boundaries of rainbows
still to show their faces
It's amazing
what the sun and rain
can achieve in harmony
Who knew,
Mother Nature could sing.

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
I shall be out of town, for a few days so I wanted to leave this for my dear friends of Neopoet. My best regards to you all.
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Not Explicit Content

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Hi, Teddy!
Prisms of joy - everywhere! Wonderful last line. Hope you enjoy your next few days.
Thank you!
L

Your kindness and generosity of words always makes me smile. Thank you. X

Thank you...Teddy

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L

I wish! I'll be back in no time. X

Thank you...Teddy

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