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Preying power:
Overbearing talk show tycoon
previously abused female
raising political balloon
avenging and rancorous trail
Holdings amply aiding passion
watching targets by surveillance
intimidating those who shun
narcissistic role renaissance
Forecasting own future secure
resulting public scrutiny
ending vaunted beginning sure
yielding related destiny
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Geezer
Sun, 2018-04-29 12:09
Not free verse...
but good rhyme and structure! I followed the the theme and felt that I got it's intent.
Nice job! ~ Geezer.
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OriginalRhyku
Mon, 2018-04-30 06:25
Geezer
Thank you - I always try to have substance to my poems and the underlying message is understood by most.
author commentvalene
Sun, 2018-04-29 12:29
expressionless claptrap
you need to dig much further afore you think....POET excalamtion mark.
they don't realise just how much they miss me 'round here.
hello andrew exclamation mark.