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Prairie In My Pocket

Prairie In My Pocket
Here in April,
the prairie wind at my back
while white clouds mottle scarce
new grass, I hold in my hand
what has stayed in the jacket for all
the long months since November
Seeds carried through cold times
since that dark day I stripped them, waiting,
from rusty plumes in my fence line;
Turkey Foot, Big Red, Blue Bluestem-
names for an old and simple grass saved
from the plow. Most I scattered on earth far
removed, scratched a shallow bed before the frost
These few are left, a pocket legacy, warning me,
a bit of prairie to seed that other earth
I hold inside my mind

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As I have lived almost my entire life within the embrace of the prairies, this poem is extremely generative for a reflective and nostalgic emotional journey to the heart of the existence of the essence of the prairie experience. The personification at the end only serves to complete the cycle of the everlasting nature of the reflective thread. Nicely done, and all the best,

Mario Vitale

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